Topic :First I had to go into a doc with lots of reasons of what an explore is then highlight the most important. I had to write a summary using those ideas of why people explore in my own words. I worked with Ella & Katelin.
W.A.L.T.'.S: Paragraphs, Write Exciting Sentences, Use mid level Punctuation Correctly.
It is obvious that some people explore for the money. You can become rich because people will pay you to explore lots of different things. They become rich because they find lots of great things when they explore like gold and silver so that makes them money.
Also for fame, fame is when you are famous. Some people are famous explorers we don’t know any famous explorers but we think people are famous because when they travel the world and explore. Some people are famous because when they are exploring they find really valuable things like gold and silver and lots of money and that is how they get rich and famous.
When they went exploring on ships some ships never returned and that's why some people stopped exploring on ships they now go exploring in cars and buses. It is told that one of the ships that went over sunk or got lost.
Lots of Spain people explore and from exploring they have made the country Spain very rich with gold and silver. Now Spain is a very lucky country and very rich.
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