Dog on the beach
Dog on the beach
Click the door opened. people were laughing. yum I said as I ran past the roasting marshmallows over the fire.My view of the the waves thrashing on the water was amazing .It was the best time to be at the Rapahoe beach.The smooth sand on my paws was a soft yellow blanket.
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ReplyDeletecool keade that is awesome i like those interesting descriptive words in your peace of writing
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I like how you said Click the door opened. people were laughing. yum I said as I ran past the roasting marshmallows over the fire. When it said click the door opened was that the car door?
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Awesome Kaede
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